Many people nowadays decide not to work for a large company but to become self-employed. What problems might this decision cause? What can they do to solve these problems?

Nowadays, people became hiring
themselfs
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and
do
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their own
buisness
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business
independentaly
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independently
rather than belonging to large companies.
Although
there are some reasons
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this
situation, some drawbacks
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this
essay will explore problems in the case and how to solve the situation.
Firstly
,
according to
the internet services development, some applications allow people to do micro
businesses
such
as
Uber
eats
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drivers
, AirBnB owners and second hands
sellors
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sellers
.
However
, sometimes
such
micro
businesses
make people unstable workforces.
For example
, workers on
Uber
eats
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are considered small
business
owners, but
actually
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they are day
labors
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.
However
,
Uber
does not provide any social
garantees
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guarantees
.
Therefore
if they face accidents or sickness, they are easily lost their daily wages.
Secondly
, there
are
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some
possiblity
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possibility
that
such
micro
businesses
deprive conventional
businees
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businesses
.
For example
,
Uber
drivers
can supersede taxi
drivers
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business
. One of the solutions for the case is to set some
sunctions
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sanctions
functions
to
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the companies that provide micro
businesses
.
For instance
,
French
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government has banned
Uber
recently because there was a huge
demonstlation
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demonstration
by taxi
drivers
. They complied that
Uber
driver steal their job, and
also
Uber
does not care
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about drivers
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drivers
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drivers'
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social
garantees
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guarantees
. As
the
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result,
government
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the government
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agrees
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with the opinion of workers,
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and finaly
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finally
Uber
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the Uber
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system has been abandoned. It is the same in Japan.
Uber
cannot be allowed in
such
countries. Admittedly,
such
new micro
businesses
are
convenence
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convenient
, but
also
these
business
model
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sometimes became being lack
of
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labor
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labour
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rights. In
conculsion
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conclusion
, as owners of small
business
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businesses
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tend to be out of
labor
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labour
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rights, governments should support or protect them. Sometimes, companies that provide micro
businesses
should
be
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set some regulations to protect
labors
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labourers
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • financial instability
  • employment benefits
  • health insurance
  • paid leave
  • retirement funds
  • collaborative environment
  • support structures
  • work-life balance
  • burnout
  • brand establishment
  • client acquisition
  • marketing strategies
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