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Advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of money.

#money
It is refutable that
money
 can bring ease, comfort, and happiness to one’s
life
,
however
, the negative side of having too much
money
 cannot be overlooked.
This
 essay intends to discuss both pros and cons of having excess
money
. There are many advantages to having plenty of
money
, one can buy anything he wishes
also
 luxuries and relaxation are part of that person’s
life
. He can afford expensive schools and books for better education, he may go on a world tour and
also
 can support needy people without thinking twice as he does not need to calculate his budget to support his family.
Besides
 the benefits of being a rich person, there are some disadvantageous
also
. A wealthy person is always in doubt that his dear ones only love his
money
 not him, so in some cases, he gets pray of stress and anxiety and his
life
 becomes miserable. Because you always call for love no matter how much
money
 you have, as you can buy great books with
money
 but not knowledge,
money
 can bring you a comfortable bed but not a good sleep. In conclusion, we can say that having too much
money
 is as dangerous as having nothing even to
fulfill
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 basic amenities of
life
 like food, shelter, and clothes. So, to spend comfortable
life
, it is essential that we know that comfort is in belief, not
money
. If we remain satisfied with what we have and do not think about what we have not, we may spend an ideal
life
.
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