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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Opinions are divided on whether highly-skilled labourers should be allowed to
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 in the
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 where they receive their training or whether should be allowed to choose their desired location.
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 I acknowledge the rationale of the latter, I am in favour of the former. Those who advocate the labour’s right to choose their
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 location may have some convincing arguments. Certain fields of
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 are more beneficial to the practician if they decided to
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 in affluent
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.
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, developed
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 are where therapists can receive decent compensation for their hard
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. Meanwhile, developing
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, despite their acknowledgement of the significance of
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 type of
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, rather allocate their resources to economic sections than to psychology.
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, I believe
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 is one of the few occupations that the worker should be allowed to choose their
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 environment as if other professions are allowed, it would create numerous adverse effects on the labour market. In my opinion, I think professionals should only
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 in their native
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 in order to prevent grey-matter loss
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 inequality. Regarding the former, it would be a tremendous loss to a
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 if some of their best and brightest decided to offer their talent to foreign
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.
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 would result in a lack of high-quality workers in key jobs in that
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, effectively denying that
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 developments. Concerning the latter, as foreign professionals started their
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 in their desired
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, they accidentally steal locals of some of their jobs.
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, many Americans grow resentment over the Asian community since Asian immigrants got the majority of the
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 in some regions. In conclusion, I firmly support the idea that highly-trained labourers should only be permitted to
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 in their
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 to avoid disturbances in the job market, both locally and globally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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