Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

In many countries around the world, it is common to start going to

school

at 6 six or 7 seven years old. Some people think that these are

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reasonable

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for

children

to start their education life,

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those who disagree point out that commencing going to

school

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earlier

gives

children

many

advantagesis

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advantages

advantages is

more advantageous for

children

. In my opinion, it is more beneficial

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for

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the suggested day when they are slightly older because only at that age one’s are they cognitively

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mature enough to receive formal education. On the one hand, some people argue that

children

should go to

school

as soon as possible because it helps to set their development their development of young ones in on the right track right

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from the beginning,

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staying at home and playing does not offer.

For example

, at

school

, a professional teacher can identify and teach

children

how to

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games that are appropriate to develop their literacy and numeracy skills. Another advantage of sending

children

early to

school

early is that the burden on the shoulders of parents,

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them, can be dramatically reduced.

On the other hand

,

children

need time to perceive the world by

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themselves and to become more mature in cognition before going to

school

.

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believe that

children

who go to

school

earlier at a younger age struggle to develop their own ideas.

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, those going to

school

earlier

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tend to be less creative than

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those who stay at home and play until

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six or seven.

Also

, by staying at home and playing, it increases the independence of

children

.

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is because they will learn to do many things by themselves, and it which gives allows

school

teachers to focus on teaching them

instead

of taking care of them. In conclusion, there is no doubt that

children

can get many advantages if they go to

school

as soon as possible.

However

, I believe that they need to spend some time

to discover

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the world by themselves and

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creativity before getting

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education from

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because it offers them creativity.