Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but people believe there are other external factors that influence us . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that pleasure is based on individuals' responsibility.

While

I accept that

this

perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that new factors impact pleasure on more considerations rather than responsibility alone. On the one hand, the personal role influence to happiness because of several driving circumstances.

Firstly

, gladness is a kind of emotional status that originate from a person's brain when humans carry out any actions and get results as their expectation.

In addition

, the person's brain is a centre to control all emotions based on their desire.

For example

, the students who are trying to study IELTS skills as much as possible,

as a result

, really feel happy if they receive the band score they aimed for.

On the other hand

, there are a host of compelling reasons why I am convinced that various factors apart from personalities

such

as family, money and love can play a crucial role in individual pleasure. It is frequently argued that no one can reach true joy if they just break a heart in love, financial burden in life or have particular serious family problems.

Furthermore

, emotion in their mind is divided into various shades

such

as hurt, anger or boredom

instead

of joyfulness.

Consequently

, the best solution is balance to individual control and alternative elements which affect joyful needs. In conclusion,

while

it is irrefutable that personal control is a component that has a decisive role to play in creating contentment, I would contend that it is imperative that new aspects be taken into consideration prior to making a satisfactory decision to themselves.