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The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans

The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans
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The given diagram depicts the steps in processing
cocoa
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beans
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 to become final
products
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. In general, there are 3 main stages to
make
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making
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 finished
products
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, from collecting
cocoa
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beans
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 to supplying
products
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 to consumers. Looking at the diagram for more detail, in the first
step
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, the whole
cocoa
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beans
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 are picked and removed shells before drying.
Subsequently
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, in the next
step
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, dried
beans
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 are pressed to become
cocoa
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liquor
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. After that,
this
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 ingredient is separated into 2 processing methods: pressing and refining. After refining
cocoa
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liquor
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 and adding sugar, industrial
chocolate
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 is produced. Meanwhile, by pressing
cocoa
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liquor
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 more,
cocoa
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 cake and
cocoa
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 are the 2 results in
this
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step
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.
Moreover
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,
cocoa
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 can be an ingredient to make industrial
chocolate
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instead
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 of refining
cocoa
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liquor
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. In the final
step
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 of the process,
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cocoa
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the cocoa
a cocoa
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 cake is ground to become
cocoa
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 powder, which is the final product to sell to consumers or mixed with
cocoa
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 to become an industrial food.
On the other hand
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, industrial
chocolate
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 is processed to make finished
chocolate
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products
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, which are ready to
service
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serve
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 to consumers.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cocoa, beans, products, step, liquor, chocolate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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