The table below shows consumer spending on different items in five countries in 2002.
The table compares consumer expenditure on various items in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002.
It is noticeable that the proportion of expenditure on food, drinks and tobacco was by far the highest among the five mentioned country
residents
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However
, the lowest percentage of these Linking Words
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residents
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residents'
budget
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allocated
to Add a missing verb
is allocated
leisure
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the leisure
activity
and education.
In 2002, 32.14% of Fix the agreement mistake
activities
an
average Turkish Correct article usage
the
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residents’
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resident’s
budget
went on food, drinks and tobacco, Use synonyms
while
the equivalent figure for Irish people was about 29.91% of their Linking Words
budget
. Italy and Sweden spent less amount of their money on these items than Ireland and Turkey, with 76.36% and 76.36%, respectively. Use synonyms
Also
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countries
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countries'
residents
allocated only under 10% of their money on closing and footwear.
Leisure activities and education accounted for the lowest proportion of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Use synonyms
Turkeys
expenditure. In fact, Spanish citizens only spent 1.98% of their money on leisure activity and education, Change noun form
Turkey's
while
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this
figure for Turkish people was about 4.35%. Linking Words
The
five mentioned countries Change preposition
In the
residents
allocated a considerable percentage of their Use synonyms
budget
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on
food, drinks and tobacco than closing and special activities.Change preposition
to
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