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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely argued that free social service should be compulsory for students
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 they are pursuing their higher school education. I am agreed with
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 statement because these programs can be very beneficial for a student in many ways
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 as in gaining
work
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experience
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 and in developing social and communication
skills
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. Community helpings can be helpful in having some understanding of a job, which can help an individual in future
jobs
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. It is very essential these days as it helps to gain some knowledge about the
work
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 that somebody likes. Despite
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, it
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 makes a
person
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 more efficient because if a
person
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 has higher
experience
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 in some
work
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, he can be able to do that task more effectively. A recent study
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 suggests that most multinational companies require some
work
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experience
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 for all of their
jobs
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, even for their easiest
jobs
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 too,
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 as janitor or peon.
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, Soft
skills
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 are
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 needed in a
person
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's life because they can help us in many situations. These abilities improve the way in which we interact with other people. These not only make a
person
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 more convincing but
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 make him able to handle difficult situations in an easy way.
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, social
skills
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 can help a
person
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 to make new friends in a new environment or in a new place and communication
skills
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 are good for making a good impression on his employee or his clients in a job.
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, teenagers should be doing some unpaid community
jobs
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, as it improves the lifestyle of students by improving soft
skills
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 and by having some prior
experience
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 of a job that a student wants to do in future

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fosters
  • social responsibility
  • sense of community
  • practical experience
  • precursor
  • professional development
  • infringes
  • unnecessary strain
  • demanding schedules
  • bridge the gap
  • foster a culture
  • integration
  • feasibility
  • genuine engagement
  • broader perspective
  • societal issues
  • active, informed citizens
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