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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

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In
the
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recent decades,
people
 have been sleeping much less compared to the past. I believe that the main reason for
this
 is the invention of electricity and
advanced
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 technologies based on them;
however
,
this
 phenomenon can be harmful
for
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 health. Before the invention of electricity,
people
 used to sleep much more because they did not have a chance to work without a convenient source of
light
. The only source of
light
 they could use were candles, which do not
last
 long and the amount of
light
 they produce is quite low.
Consequently
, it was more beneficial for them to fall asleep after sunset.
This
 is proven by various historical studies around the globe.
In contrast
, the majority of
people
 nowadays have easy access to a wide range of
light
 sources based on electricity, which allows them to do chores even when it is dark outside. Unfortunately,
modern
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 lifestyle is quite unnatural for humans and can have a bad impact on health. The main reason for
this
 is the reduced amount of sleep, which affects all organs of the human body. Apart from that, the lack of sleep can lead to mental illnesses and stress, which has a cascading effect on society because
such
 an individual can be unfriendly or even rude
with
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 others.
For instance
, recent studies show that the amount of sleep positively correlates with the level of happiness. In conclusion, advances in
technologies
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 encourage
people
 to sleep less;
however
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 it is crucial for them to maintain
balance
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a balance
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 between health and work. Lack of sleep affects the human mind and can lead to bad mood or even depression.
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