The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
double line graph depicts how different salaries between the four jobs in the chart. It's clear from the chart the average of working and how to get a high
salary
in the UK.
According to
what is shown, the average working
hours
for police is about 40
hours
per week
besides
the
salary
is 2100£
pounds
but after three
years
is increasing to 2300£
pounds
. ,Nurse they are working around 38
hours
per week they take 1800£
pounds
when they started now after three
years
get 1900£
pounds
. So, firefighters work 55
hours
per week they get 4000£
pounds
but after 3
years
they around 4100£
pounds
. Eventually ,the underground driver works for about 36
hours
the
salary
is 5000£
pounds
after 3
years
it's increased to 5100£
pounds
.
To sum up
. We could say that the underground drivers work less and get a high
salary
, on the other ,hand nurses work more and get less
salary
between four jobs .
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