Write a letter to the local authorities for requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. - Mention about the current sports facilities available - What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced - How the new sports facilities would be of help for the people in your age group

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
to request you to provide new sports amenities for the young people of
this
area. Presently, there is an open ground next to the Church, where children can play any sport and even the older generation would get a chance to be relaxed and fit as well
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since the place is equipped with modern gym equipment.
Nevertheless
, people of my age are deprived of
such
benefits. I would like to suggest that there should be an indoor stadium, where sports
such
as table tennis, badminton, lawn tennis and many more should be introduced
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so that officer goers like me will get a chance to rejuvenate their minds after work hours.
Also
, it would be appropriate if the authorities could convert the open space adjacent to the main street into
stadium
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.
This
is because
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residents use it as a dumping site to throw garbage and other waste materials. These provisions not only benefit the youth
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but
also
children and other enthusiasts who  want to pursue their career in sport.
Such
a place is highly imperative for the working people in order to get out of the sedentary lifestyle, they are leading nowadays. Yours Sincerely, Jaspreet Kaur Khaira
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