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Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In today's fast-paced world, whether creating a new
language
 for global interaction or not has persistently been a subject of dispute among people.
However
, I strongly believe that the advantages of using a new international
language
 do outweigh its demerits. There are many reasons why inventing a new
language
 can not be accepted by the majority of the population.
Firstly
, more money from the budget of the country is allocated by the government for
this
 purpose
as well
as
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 it can lead to an obvious problem. Namely, communities can prefer to allocate more money to other fields like education and health rather than inventing a new
language
. And
then
, some people especially senior citizens can be reluctant to learn a new
language
.
It is clear that
 already school children have a
heavy
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 trouble with many lessons and it is no secret that if a new
language
adds
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 their syllabus, they face many
problems
 during their studies. In spite of the disadvantages of
this
 given above, several reasons could be mentioned why some want a new
language
 which
uses
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 all over the world. First of all, some think that by inventing a new international
language
, we can solve all
problems
 all over the world.
This
 means that businessmen or leaders of countries can communicate without translators to other leaders and they can solve
problems
 with each other by protecting privacy in the same
language
.
Secondly
, they believe that students can take a chance to study at universities in other countries they want.
Therefore
, these students will get more information about other countries' education and
also
 cultures, and holidays. In conclusion, creating a new
language
 can cause some obvious drawbacks,
such
 as wasting money and facing many
problems
during
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 learning a new
language
, but I believe that owning a new
language
 is the best choice and the benefits that it brings about can outshine its drawbacks.
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