The diagram details the process of making wool. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the various steps in the process of making woollen products.
Overall
, there are 10 principal stages in this
process, beginning with the rearing of sheep and ending with the finished goods.
Firstly
, sheep are reared, until they have enough wool
on their bodies for the next step – removing the wool
, known as shearing. At
the third and fourth stages, Change preposition
In
this
wool
is cleaned and dried. It is then
ready for spinning by machine, after which the wool
is almost ready to be made into different products. At this
spinning stage, however
, some of the product can be used to make string and may be recycled.
From the wool
produced at the sixth stage, tufts of wool
are manufactured and then
stored. Next,
the tufted wool
is used for spinning into balls of yarn. Finally
, these balls of yarn may be used for knitting or for making into
woollen goods, Change preposition
apply
such
as jackets or carpets.Submitted by thanhvinhdoi338 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wool with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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