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Most people pay taxes to contribute to the development of their country, however, some think they have other responsibilities rather than paying taxes. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Over the past few decades, there is a significant
growth
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 in the world. It is a public opinion that, For the
country
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's
growth
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, individuals need to pay tariffs.
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 others say that, there are other more important things to do rather than paying
taxes
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. In my opinion, Citizens need to pay
taxes
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 for better development of our
country
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.
This
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 disquisition delineates both views and reaches a proper conclusion. To embark with,
People
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 play an important role in the
growth
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 of a
country
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. Human beings are paying
taxes
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 for single items.
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 could be a great contribution to the
country
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.
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,
Countries
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 like Europe, New Zealand, and Canada have good transportation, Marvelous health care system, Great education support systems, etc
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 The authorities of these
countries
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, collect
taxes
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 from the citizens
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 the amount each person receives.
As a result
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,
people
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 in
this
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country
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 are willing to give
taxes
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 because they are happy with the government providing to the public. If
People
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 are not ready to give
taxes
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 it will affect the
country
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's
growth
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.
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, In some
countries
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, The government is not providing basic needs to the citizens even though they are paying tariffs.
For example
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, developing
Countries
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 like India, are not delivering good public roads or health systems to the
people
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.
Consequently
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, humans will think before paying
taxes
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. Their priority will change to other matters. To Summarise, Government should ensure that
people
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 are getting their essential things from the authorities. If they are getting correctly all
people
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 will be ready to pay
taxes
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 which will be a great contribution to the nation for better development.
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