Nowadys celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achivements and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disgree with this statement?

Recent years have witnessed a debate about whether

celebrities

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'

achievements

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are making them famous or whether their

popularity

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is measured based on their

wealth

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and

glamour

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.

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many youngsters are in demand of support for the latter view, I hold the belief that

celebrities

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are more known for their

achievements

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. On the one hand,

glamour

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and

wealth

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are associated factors, making

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popular among a lot of young generations.

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, one of the Bollywood actors received a gift for a McLaren GT car from his producer which made him India's first owner of

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a luxurious car. The news got huge attention from the media which was the reason for the influence on many people.

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, aspirants received a bad

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by just looking into a person's

wealth

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for his

popularity

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, one cannot ignore a person's

achievements

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for his or her

popularity

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.

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with, the well-known celebrity of India, Mr Shahrukh Khan, people admire for his humbleness, hard work and dedication towards his work, and

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he survived in his field for the past 40 years

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motivated people all around the world.

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, an Academy

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actor Mr Matthew McConaughey is another great

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who became famous because of his

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. He inspired many youngsters through his podcasts, speeches and the best-selling book called Greenlights.

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it is clear that

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values

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as

achievements

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, hard work, dedication, etc. are more important for a person's

popularity

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.

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,

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glamour

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and

wealth

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are playing

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an important role

to establish

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in young minds, I believe that

celebrities

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'

achievements

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are contributing

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more to creating a positive

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for youngsters.

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, I strongly discourage the statement that

glamour

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and

wealth

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are the

bases

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basis

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of why

celebrities

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are more famous.