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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Generally,
Crime
 Novels and
TV
crime
 dramas are becoming more and more popular and promoted. I will be emphasizing why I think the
books
 and
TV
crime
 shows are getting viral and
also
 what are my opinions of
crime
 fiction and
TV
crime
 movies. I have seen Trillers, advertisements for products using
crime
 shows, and
Tv
 series which are known as sessional movies. They are all rapid. From where I stand, despite being bad or good in the
crime
 play we have more individuals paying attention to it than a romantic display. People have lost touch with romance movies. If you go on some platform you will definitely watch a series of
crime
 skits. When you get to the library or rent
books
 online you will definitely see how
crime
books
 are been borrowed or bought online or in bookstores. Most youths find it a pleasure in seeing those
books
 and
crime
 acting. I may be a good example of that. Please don't get the wrong idea about me seeing them. Everyone has a way of how they relaxed after having a rough day and
also
 I don't support
crime
. Basically,I have been having so many thoughts about my side of judgement to
this
 and I think they should get rid of some information
for instance
, types of guns, how to escape from prison, how to commit robberies and others. I feel it should be more about morals and not all about the actions going on in the film. And
also
 or guidance at home should give some restrictions to
such
 films.
Furthermore
, it should be the best way of communicating with young people about how to stay out of
crime
. In conclusion,
crime
 shows are everywhere and it's been encouraged more by youngsters I feel it's better it guide by the parent on what they watch and they should be used for promoting good morals.
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