The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000.

The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000.
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The given bar chart illustrates the
rate
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of illiterate men and women by region in 2000.
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it is clear that
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in all nations the degree of illiteracy of women was higher compared to that of men. In developed countries, the number of uneducated females was low,
while
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in South
Asia
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amount has higher. As it is observed from the illustration, in developed countries the
rate
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of illiterate women was approximately 3 % and
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proportion is increasing in other regions. In Latin America, the graph showed 10 % and in East
Asia
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/Oceania was 20%. In Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
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the amount of educated has an upward trend, and remained at 48%, 50% and 55%, respectively. In terms of illiterate males, in developed countries the untaught male
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was 1% and in Latin America,
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rate
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was 10%, but in East
Asia
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/Oceania the illiterate males were less than in Latin America, the percentage was 8 %.
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, in Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
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the number of illiterate men was nearly the same, accounting for 30%, 28%, and 32%, respectively.
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