this task. A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....................,

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Dear Mona! I am glad to hear that you choose FAST University to pursue your degree in computer sciences. There is a lot to share with you regarding culture, faculty and administrative staff.

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, I will go through the list of optional subjects which I found very useful. So here comes!! I took advanced concepts of

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and I really found it beneficial in my professional career .

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, people from multinational firms organise labs to apply concepts to real-time data As far as faculty is concerned ,

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university has the best people available .They will polish your skills and train you

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market demands . A big job fair and private campaign organized by the university to find the best job with

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package.

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procedure for your ease let me inform you that people apply actively through the online portal as well . Just sit at your home take pictures of your degrees and attach them with the application and all done!! Good luck with your assignments and projects Regards, Wajeeha

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

179 words

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