Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities, for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that outside of school children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views.

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taking

responsibilities

is something that, which helps

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individuals to get success in their

life

Thus

, it is taught by experts that,Childhood age of individuals is very

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important

to give

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of house

charces

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charges

churches

and

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,

while

others

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think that,

children

should enjoy their

life

.

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essay will

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both views

along with

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. in the upcoming paragraphs. One of the main

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significant

benefits of

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responsibilities

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the

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child

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age

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is that

children

become more responsible.They can easily learn about

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management.

Also

, they can settle their future,

while

understanding the duties of their parents and themselves.

for example

, if people take

responsibilities

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in their childhood age

due to

some personal problems, they will have

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neural

experience to earn money and

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all

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work on time as compared to those

children

who

donot

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do not

aware of taking

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dust

duties,

As a result

,

children

do

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hardware

hard work

diligently in order to

fulfill

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the needs of their family and

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complete

the future goals. On the

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flip

side, playing outdoor activities with friends and siblings after school is very crucial for them to

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halistic

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holistic

development.

Children

can get more education in their

life

as well as

they can far away from stress, depression and headache problems.

Apart from

this

, they not only improve their Communication skills but

also

ameliorate social bonding with each other, when they visit outside places.

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families do not pressure

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their kids for taking

responsibilies

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responsibilities

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house

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, they

also

recomended

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recommend

them

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to do focus on study.

Hence

,

Children

get good marks in

this

education and

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to get good

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jobs

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opportunities, which

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provided by

government

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. In conclusion,

although

there are more benefits of taking

responsibilities

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for

children

to do house

charce

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charge

work and managing the activities are more

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pivotal

,

balance

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of

life

by being

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responsible

resposible

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responsible

is more considerable