The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart illustrates the main reasons why agricultural
land
becomes less productive. The table describes how these causes affected three regions of world
during the 1990s
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the world
Overall
, overgrazing in Oceania is the biggest reason
of
less productive agricultural lands
It is clear from the pie chart that the first Change preposition
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reason
of
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for
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degradation is over - cultivation is the case
with the smallest percentage
just over a quarter except other
minor cases with a tiny fraction. Change preposition
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the Second
reason
is deforestation is quite a higher percentage
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that is
two percent
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per cent
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over-grazing
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with the highest percentage
than any other reasons of
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for
land
degradation, this
case
is five percent
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per cent
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percent
more than Change the spelling
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over - culturing
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over-culturing
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the pie
percentage
of degraded agricultural land
. And Europe also
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