Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operative rather than compete become more useful aduts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People

believe that

children

should have between themselves a sense of

competition

.

On the other hand

,

others

think if they evolve a sense of cooperation with

others

can help them in adulthood.

This

essay will see why is important to teach

competition

in

children

and why is important to educate them to be cooperative with

others

. In my opinion, both points of view are important for good development of a child.

To begin

with, inculcating

competition

can help them in sports and will make them want to improve every time.

Therefore

, always have seen

competition

as having a negative impact on

children

.

However

, if they are taught

competition

is between themselves and not

others

can be something positive for the

future

children

.

For example

, in high school ,

,

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apply

show examples

usually you have sport as a subject in which to have good performance have to be competitive if

competition

does not damage anything else can be something positive in school and help the

children

's social skills as well. In opposition, some other

people

feel have given their

children

other skills

such

as cooperation will be useful in the

future

.

This

is mainly because if you learn to share with your peers would make it easy in the

future

to socialise and make long-lasting relationships with

others

.

For instance

, an only child from his parents will find it difficult to share things and to be cooperative with

others

which will affect her social relationship in the

future

because

people

will find them selfish. In conclusion, there are two points of view on how to support

children

to develop good values for the

future

.In my ,opinion both points of view need to be complemented to support

children

in the

future

so they can be better

people

and cooperative with

others

.