The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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The line graph illustrates the rate of

carbon

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production per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal which were produced over 40 years from 1967 to 2007. Units are measured in metric

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, the average of

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in the United Kingdom and Sweden declined over the period given,

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in Italy and Portugal, it climbed. Over the given duration the United Kingdom had the highest emission of

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. On the one hand, the amount of

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emmited

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in the UK started at around 11

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and it slightly decreased to about 9

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in the

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year.

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it began at approximately 9 metric

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and

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peaked at about over 10

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before falling dramatically to almost 6 metric

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in the final year.

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the production of CO2 increased from just above 4 to just below 8 metric

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, in Portugal it

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at roughly 1 in 1967 and jumped to nearly 6 in 2007.

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The Graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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