IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertiliser (compost).

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The given diagram illustrates the steps of the production of
garden
Use synonyms
 fertilizer by recycling organic waste.
Overall
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, it is obvious that
this
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 process of manufacturing compost includes 5 basic stages, starting with preparing a bottle and ending with the composted organic
garden
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 fertilizer.
At the first stage
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 of the producing
garden
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 compost process, plastic glass is prepared which can contain 2000 litre of water.
This
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 bottle has several holes on both sides to allow airflow to enter and exit the container. At the following stage, the container is layered with the foodstuff, the grass clipping and the waste paper. And the required thickness is about 15 centimetres. The next stage is when pouring hot water and nitrogen into the glass. After that, the bottle is sealed with the lid. Air will flow into and out of the holes in the sides of the jar as
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 process is taking place. In the next 6 months, the composted
garden
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 is produced and ready to be used.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words garden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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