Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, the number of people with the issue of their health try a different way than visiting

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the doctor to heal their illness.

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alternative way to cope with their sickness, they have to deal with the consequence that arises since the alternative does not have

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legal research, which leads to negative development. To start with, in the modern’s era, some people still believe

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herbal

clinic

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and traditional medicines because they think that the

treatment

will heal faster and

also

it is cheaper than visiting

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the doctor.

Moreover

, they opt

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alternatives as they are attracted by the advertisement and

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by their friends,

while

it is not always

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choice to choose

due to

the result will depend on chance.

For example

, based on

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my friend’s story, the traditional Chinese

medicine

promoted their drug to their parents and guaranteed it can heal quickly and gave a lower price than usual, but

eventually

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the parents of my friend felt more pain,

therefore

they tested the drug and the lab told to them that

medicine

was not in testing on government laboratory.

On the other hand

, the government have already made the rules which govern

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herbal and traditional

treatment

which should have

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certificate that indicates their procedure is safe for the patient.

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herbal clinics do not have

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guarantee

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their

treatment

is safe and the price of the

treatment

is not expensive

then

attracting more

patient

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patients

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than the hospital.

For instance

, the acupuncture clinic near my house has more patients than the hospital in the same complex which caused the hospital to

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to another area.

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people should be aware of the consequence of using the

medicine

given by

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clinics which

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not have

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legitimate certificate with the aim of safety for the community.

Consequently

, the community will suffer from the negative effect

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non-legal

medicine

.