Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, the number of people with the issue of their health try a different way than visiting
to
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Although
they find the
alternative way to cope with their sickness, they have to deal with the consequence that arises since the alternative does not have Correct article usage
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the
legal research, which leads to negative development.
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treatment
will heal faster and also
it is cheaper than visiting to
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Moreover
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promoted their drug to their parents and guaranteed it can heal quickly and gave a lower price than usual, but eventually
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therefore
they tested the drug and the lab told to them that medicine
was not in testing on government laboratory.
On the other hand
, the government have already made the rules which govern for
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treatment
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