Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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There is a common debate on whether
religion
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should be added to schools' curricula or should be avoided.
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a religious curriculum may help
students
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to understand their homeland's
cultures
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, I personally believe that religious education can be unfair to
students
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who are atheists and it
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can be used to spread propaganda if schools and governments are not transparent about
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topic. On one hand, including
mythology
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in the academic curriculum can help
students
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to have a deep understanding of their
cultures
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. It can be seen that
religion
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is one of the most important aspects of numerous
cultures
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.
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, to understand your country's
mythology
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is to acknowledge and cherish the beauty of your culture, and admission who graduate from a religious school will be more patriotic and eager to contribute to their home nations.
For example
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, Vietnam decided to include
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in its primary and secondary education, and a survey conducted in 2019 shows that 74.8% of
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showed interest in learning about their country's
religion
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and said that they were proud of having a beautiful culture.
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, religious education can be used by governments to spread propaganda and false information.
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is because children's way of learning is fundamentally different from adults: they learn what they are told. Because of
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, admission, especially primary recruitment, are vulnerable to misinformation.
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, the government can use religious curriculums as a reason to brainwash young generations.
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, North Korea used
mythology
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as an excuse to spread propaganda,
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as they are the greatest nation in the world or that famines and diseases in North Korea are caused by the USA, which is far from the truth. For the reasons above, I totally believe that
mythology
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should not be included in schools' curriculums. In conclusion, even though teaching myths in academies may have a positive impact on the recruitment of patriotism and understanding of their
cultures
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, religious curriculums can be used to brainwash
students
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and
therefore
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, should not be included.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • religious education
  • multi-faith society
  • values and ethics
  • tolerance
  • diversity
  • religious freedom
  • secular education
  • curriculum
  • worldviews
  • interfaith dialogue
  • religious literacy
  • moral guidance
  • cultural understanding
  • critical thinking
  • respect
  • indoctrination
  • religious beliefs
  • secular state
  • religious extremism
  • academic subject
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