The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph gives information about the proportions of export from Australia to
Japan
, the US, China
and India between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, the percentage of Australian exports in China
and India witnessed an upward trend while
,
the opposite pattern could be observed in the shares of Remove the comma
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Japan
and the US which decreased slightly. Also
, Japan
was the highest result compared with other countries at the beginning of the period, but this
position was taken over by China
.
Turning to details, India’s line was shown as a mere, this
line wasn’t changed with between 1990 and 2000 which made up approximately 1%. Then
, this
figure rose marginally and was about 7% in 2010, but it went down again until 5% at the end
of the span. Likewise
, China
also
saw an upward pattern, rising significantly from around 3% to well below 30% throughout the time interval.
There was decreased normally in Japan
in this
list, from roughly 25% to about 16% during the whole span. Regarding the US, there was a fluctuating dynamic, generally, the share of the US, fall
from just above 10% to around 6% over the whole period.
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