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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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Manufacturing industries acquire various commodities like crude oil, coal and gas and it may seem that overconsumption can cause deprivation of these resources.
This
 essay will firmly elaborate on the method that reduces
fuel
 utilization and other natural alternatives like renewable energies. There are several ways to conserve
energy
 and one of them is by adopting different modes of transportation. Every individual is liable to adapt to changes in order to alleviate
fuel
 consumption by using cars less frequently. Another way can be carpooling that emerges commute which reduces gas combustion and carbon emissions.
Energy
-efficient technologies like Led bulbs can be installed to protect against waste.
Moreover
, some people can opt for bicycles or can go on foot.
For example
, the people of the Netherlands are fostering the habit of using public transport and bicycles to cover daily pursuits. Renewable
energy
 resources like solar
energy
, tidal wave, wind mil and thermal
energy
 can serve as alternatives to save
energy
 crises. The abundance of solar
energy
 through solar panels can generate enormous amounts of electricity that can cover from basic level household up to industrial manufacturing needs, not only
this
, but it will be beneficial to run electric cars. In China, many houses have installed solar panel and windmill to run daily activities and save a maximum of 70% of average electricity which is equal to operating another power plant. In conclusion, relying on
fuel
 reserves might lead to an
energy
 crisis in the longer run, for that many alternatives like solar panels have been used up to minimize
fuel
 utilization. Unnecessary use of vehicles like cars can cause
energy
 expenditure, to avoid them bicycles and
energy
-efficient technologies can be implemented.
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