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some people say that international problems should be tackled at a national level. However, others argue that these should be managed globally. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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People have different views about whether environmental
problems
 should be tackled at a national
level
 or at an international
level
.
Although
 some consider that these ought to be addressed nationally, I would argue that environmental
issues
 need global addressing. On the one hand, every country is facing various environmental
issues
. It is believed that these
problems
 should be tackled at the individual
level
, and the government should make strict environmental protection laws and enforce them throughout the nation.
Along with
this
, running environment conservation campaigns at a national
level
 is considered to be efficacious in imparting awareness about the adverse impact of environmental
problems
 on the Earth’s climate.
Furthermore
, it is
also
 argued that the world’s richest nations are facing economic recessions so
instead
 of looking towards others for solutions, it would be better for a nation to cope with environmental
issues
 at its own
level
.
On the other hand
, I would agree with those who say that environmental
problems
 should be tackled worldwide. In fact, environmental
problems
 are not confined to one geographical location and impact the entire Earth’s environment.
For example
, excessive emissions of greenhouse gases from across the world are responsible melting of polar ice caps.
In other words
, the non-eco-friendly practices in one country are impacting the entire world and even some nations are very poor and they need international support to overcome environmental
issues
. Presently, some international organizations, like the United Nations, the world health organization, and the United States environmental protection agency, are working in many countries to save the environment. These efforts should be more globalized and every country should contribute as much as it can to keep our planet habitable for living. In conclusion, I would argue that environmental
problems
 are impacting the entire globe so these
issues
 should be addressed at an international
level
.
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