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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are significant difficulties for individuals who have to talk
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 other languages especially, the oversea,
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 as socializing
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 or practical troubles.I personally agree that there are some
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 for immigrant people. In
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 essay, I intend explanation some of these issues. On the one hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that immigrants to a new country have noticeable social
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.
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,
although
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 it might not be difficult
to begin
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 a simple discussion
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 as about weather or
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, the requirement of strong communication is the ability to speak
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the native
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 of that region because there are several phrases that people used
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in daily speaking. So if the immigrants do not talk with that local
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 they are unable to have a relationship development with them easily.
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, perhaps speakers use some words that have an opposite means of
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while
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 the
foreigners
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language
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do
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 not understand the exact meaning of that. so they are unable to
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 presence in the complex speech or discussions.
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, many commentators justifiably argue that there are some practical
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 for
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 living overseas. finding a job is one of the
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 for a person who cannot talk with the local
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 because
language
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 knowledge is an essential condition of most companies especially if workers explore
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a specific job.
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, they
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 not understand a wide variety of daily rules
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 as when they want to drive they do not know
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 of signs or considerations. In conclusion, I strongly agree the disadvantage of living in a foreign country without enough
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 knowledge is far more
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, communication issues and practical
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such
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 as finding a job.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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