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The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
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The table illustrates the number of people who went to Ashdown Museum in the year before and after its
renovation
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 the pie charts give the information about satisfaction of the
visitors
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 in those time periods which is collected through surveys.
Overall
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, after redecorating the museum the number of tourists increased on the whole. Before the refurbishment, a large number of guests were dissatisfied and only a few did not give
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response.
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 after its
renovation
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 more and more
visitors
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 were very satisfied but the response of travellers about satisfaction and dissatisfaction was
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 increased. In the year before and after the
renovation
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, the percentage of dissatisfied and satisfied
visitors
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 was the same respectively which was 40%. When the museum was not renovated, 30% of tourists were satisfied, 15% were very satisfied and 10% were very dissatisfied but 5% of
visitors
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 did not give any response.
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, after the year of redecoration, the amount of extremely satisfied
visitors
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 increased by 20% and became 35%. For the dissatisfied and very satisfied guests, the portions were reduced to 15% and 5% respectively and 5% of people did not give any answer before and after the
renovation
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words renovation, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • number of visitors
  • refurbishment
  • surveys
  • satisfaction levels
  • overview
  • before and after
  • data
  • before the museum was refurbished
  • after the museum was refurbished
  • survey results
  • satisfaction levels
  • summarize
  • draw a conclusion
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