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In their advertising ,business nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way。Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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It is becoming increasingly common that companies propaganda their goods have something new in their advertising 。
This
 essay will look at the reason behind
this
 development and explain why I think its disadvantages outweigh
advantages
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To begin
 with ,the main reason why businesses prefer showing their new parts
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 production is because
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they can attract the attention of customers especially
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people
 often interested in new things.
Therefore
，sales will rise.
For instance
 , when buying soft drinks, the public may be attracted to cola without sugar because it is new and they want to try what it tasted like. The secondary factor we need to take into consideration is that Some companies are very confident about their recent innovations. They believe
this
 is the most important advantage
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this
 product and believe that it is special. The main consequences of
this
 trend have been sometimes negative. It is obvious that the new things some advertisements propaganda about may actually be unimportant or even fake, which will damage the benefits of customers. To illustrate
this
,Some snacks will advertise that there is no sugar in their products but there is still a sweet taste to attract
people
 who want to lose weight to buy, but in fact, they just change the kind of sugar, which
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 only does not have the effect of losing weight
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 but may even make
people
 more obesity .
In addition
，excessive advertisements
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 new things will make
people
 want to buy more, after they buy these and find that it is useless, they may throw it which causes harm to the environment and
waste
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 of money. In conclusion,
this
 kind of advertising of the company promotes their new invention to make more money, but the information
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 these advertisements is sometimes untrue, which will harm the customers’ benefits, so
this
 is not a good development.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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