The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Presented for consideration are two maps highlighting the changes which took place in
an
agricultural land.
From an Remove the article
apply
overall
perspective, this
area
showed a tendency to turn into Correct article usage
a metropolilis
metropolilis
for tourism purposes. It is clear to observe that many buildings are constructed Correct your spelling
metropolis
to
Change preposition
in
village
. In the western half of the map, the beach seaside remained untouched but it was extended and improved to develop into Add an article
the village
swimming
Correct article usage
a swimming
area
, trees are not chopped down to keep the area
green, surrounding them are new foothpath
and Correct your spelling
footpath
footpaths
housing
Correct article usage
a housing
area
built in the vicnity
of the beach. Correct your spelling
vicinity
Furthermore
, in the past
there was nothing in the middle of Add a comma
,past
field
, but it was changed by adding many new construction.
Following on dining establishments and reception house is built and surround those are lane lead to the new pier in the sea, Add an article
the field
a field
moreover
, there is a residential area
which evolve
9 houses for local inhabitants Change the verb form
evolves
last
but not least, a bunch of trees are remained
unchanged to the east of the map.Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
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