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Children are facing more pressure nowdays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken reduce these pressures?

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Today's young
people
 are meeting with more
problems
on
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 education, social and
bussines
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business
approach
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 these days.
This
 essay intends to consider the causes of these
problems
 and offer some measures to reduce the pressures. I
sure
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 that young
people
 must be defined
from
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such
 mounting
problems
. There are many education
problem
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on
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 youths. Today's kids are not competing with the child next door or even of one's city or country. But parents would like their
teenages
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teenagers
teenager
 to
exsel
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excel
 in every field. The parents send their kids to the best schools, where the school bag is often heavier than the child himself. Even after school
hours
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 there are personal tuitions. But the children bring out their hidden talents. The solutions are not simple. Kids have to be handled with great look after. Parents should have realistic
supposition
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on
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 their children. They should have
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a pro-active
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pro-active
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proactive
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 perspective and give time to their youth. The biggest
onusison
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onus is on
 the schools and teachers. Teachers should attempt to bring
our
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 the best in every kid and competition and cooperation should both be
learn
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 simultaneously. The goal of competition should not be to
succed
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succeed
 at all
cost
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costs
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. The young
people
 have to be taught to
succed
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succeed
 with modesty and lose with grace. Summing up,  there is no hesitation that the children of today are meeting so many
problems
, but steps should be taken on a war footing to protect their innocent childhood. These
problems
 will stifle the physical and psychological rise of young
people
.
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