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Some people think that a person can never understand the culture of a country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion?

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It is argued that we will not be able to understand the
culture
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 of a nation without speaking their language. I disagree with
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 statement because we can use translation apps to read about countries'
cultures
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 and visual content can help to understand
cultures
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. In the past internet was not common among
people
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. But with technological developments, the internet became more popular in the world. Travelling to another
country
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 was a big challenge because of the language issue. They had to join guided tours to get more information about countries'
cultures
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. But today languages are not any more issues to learning more about the nations. Before or during our trip, we can do some research about the traditions and
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 of the
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 that we are going to visit and the population as well.
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, Google Translate innovated a feature which is giving us the possibility to translate
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text which is on the wall. We need to take pictures of it and upload it to the app. Learning their mother tongue is not the only way to communicate with the
people
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. Showing some rituals which belong to that
country
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 is another effective way to demonstrate
culture
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.
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,
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 we are having a walk in the city centre, it can give us information about their dress
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. Watching them provides more details about tradition.
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,
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 who are visiting another
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 for a trip to
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 integrate themselves
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 imitating
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's dances or dressing like them. In conclusion, I disagree with that opinion because speaking is not the only way to learn about humans'
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 and traditions and the language barrier is not anymore a problem thanks to inventions in technology.
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