There is no denying fact that
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in recent time some individuals
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having offsprings
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at
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age
. In my opinion, it is a positive development because
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solidify their relationship before the arrival of their kids
also
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the opportunity to improve their income.
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children
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hand, some people believe that arrival of youngsters might distance them from their
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before
children
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in other to build financial security for their kids.
For instance
, my niece did not start having babies until after 5 years of marriage, in which they claimed working hard to earn more money before
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of their offspring, and
this
made them stable financially. Moreso, some people believe maturity is essential before having
children
and maturity comes with
age
.
On the other hand
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. Having
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age
may cause medical complications
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the mother and the baby. In 2021, A survey carried out by midwives in Lagos State Nigeria,
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some maternal complications is
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years and above. Another thing
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is that raising
children
at older
age
might be financial burdens
due to
retirement.
In conclusion,
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as one get older has
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,
such
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it might cause , prenatal and postnatal problems and financial hardship
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.