There is no denying fact that
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in recent time some individuals
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having offsprings
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. In my opinion, it is a positive development because
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solidify their relationship before the arrival of their kids
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the opportunity to improve their income.
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late might be stressful because they are out of
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hand, some people believe that arrival of youngsters might distance them from their
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before
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in other to build financial security for their kids.
, my niece did not start having babies until after 5 years of marriage, in which they claimed working hard to earn more money before
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of their offspring, and
made them stable financially. Moreso, some people believe maturity is essential before having
and maturity comes with
.
, as having offsprings as an individual get older has
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hand, it
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. Having
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may cause medical complications
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the mother and the baby. In 2021, A survey carried out by midwives in Lagos State Nigeria,
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that
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some maternal complications is
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years and above. Another thing
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is that raising
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might be financial burdens
retirement.
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as one get older has
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as financial stability, creating good relationship among couple and maturity,
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it might cause , prenatal and postnatal problems and financial hardship
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