People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

There is no denying fact that

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in recent time some individuals

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having offsprings

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children

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age

. In my opinion, it is a positive development because

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solidify their relationship before the arrival of their kids

also

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the opportunity to improve their income.

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children

late might be stressful because they are out of

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hand, some people believe that arrival of youngsters might distance them from their

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, so they build

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before

children

started coming.

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claimed that wealth should be

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in other to build financial security for their kids.

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, my niece did not start having babies until after 5 years of marriage, in which they claimed working hard to earn more money before

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of their offspring, and

this

made them stable financially. Moreso, some people believe maturity is essential before having

children

and maturity comes with

age

.

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hand, it

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. Having

children

at

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age

may cause medical complications

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the mother and the baby. In 2021, A survey carried out by midwives in Lagos State Nigeria,

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that

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some maternal complications is

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thirty five

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years and above. Another thing

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is that raising

children

at older

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might be financial burdens

due to

retirement. In conclusion,

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as one get older has

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side

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,

such

as financial stability, creating good relationship among couple and maturity,

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it might cause , prenatal and postnatal problems and financial hardship

due to

lack of

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.