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The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph compares the number of visits to new music websites which is Music Choice and Pop Parade during 15
days
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Overall
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, both sites experienced an upward trend over the period.
However
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, they had some fluctuations throughout the time. Pop Parade accounted for 120
visitors
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 on
day
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 1 and stayed relatively stable in the first 3
days
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. Afterwards, steadily decrease to just above 60 on
day
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 5. After a slight increase, it showed a dramatical decline to nearly 30
at the end
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 of the week.
Subsequently
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, between
days
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 7 and 9, it stayed stable.
Day
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 9 it rocketed to approximately 150. But it fell dramatically to nearly 80 on
day
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 12 and stayed the same on the coming
day
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. After
day
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 13 it rose substantially to almost 160 on
day
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 14 and had a small increase to around 170 on
day
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 15. Music Choice made up 40 on
day
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 1 and fluctuated in the first 4
days
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 between 20 and 60
visitors
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.
Then
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, it stayed relatively stable from
day
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 4 to
day
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 11 around 25
visitors
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. After
day
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 11 it show a substantial rose to 120 on
day
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 12.
Then
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, stayed relatively stable between
days
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 12 and 14 around 118. On
day
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 15 it declined significantly to just under 80
visitors
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words days, visitors, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compares" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "substantially" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Music sites
  • Web traffic
  • Number of visits
  • Trend analysis
  • Initial phase
  • Steady increase
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant change
  • Peaks
  • Turning point
  • Growth rate
  • Seasonal variation
  • Comparative analysis
  • Long-term trend
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