The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph compares the number of visits to new music websites which is Music Choice and Pop Parade during 15
days
.
Overall
, both sites experienced an upward trend over the period. However
, they had some fluctuations throughout the time.
Pop Parade accounted for 120 visitors
on day
1 and stayed relatively stable in the first 3 days
. Afterwards, steadily decrease to just above 60 on day
5. After a slight increase, it showed a dramatical decline to nearly 30 at the end
of the week.Subsequently
, between days
7 and 9, it stayed stable. Day
9 it rocketed to approximately 150. But it fell dramatically to nearly 80 on day
12 and stayed the same on the coming day
. After day
13 it rose substantially to almost 160 on day
14 and had a small increase to around 170 on day
15.
Music Choice made up 40 on day
1 and fluctuated in the first 4 days
between 20 and 60 visitors
. Then
, it stayed relatively stable from day
4 to day
11 around 25 visitors
. After day
11 it show a substantial rose to 120 on day
12. Then
, stayed relatively stable between days
12 and 14 around 118. On day
15 it declined significantly to just under 80 visitors
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