People nowadays tend to have children at older age. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage

In recent times, people are likely to give

birth

to their offspring that an older

age

.

Although

having children at old might be detrimental to their

health

and various

complications

can arise.

However

, it enables the guardian to be mentally prepared and financially stable .

However

, I believe the advantage outweigh the drawbacks as

complications

can be reversed with adequate medical treatment.

However

,

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of stable income can lead to

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upbringing

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the child. On the one hand, the drawbacks of giving

birth

at

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old

age

can lead to

complications

like eclampsia which is caused

as a

result

of hormonal imbalances, which is common at older

age

.

However

,

this

is detrimental to

health

and

as a

result

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it can lead to

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section.

For instance

, A woman at 40 tends to give

birth

to multiple babies and

at

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the long run,

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section was done and her chances of survival will be low

due to

bleeding after

birth

.

Therefore

,

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birth

in old

age

is detrimental to

health

.

On the other hand

, the benefit of giving

birth

at older

age

include mental preparedness and financial stability.

That is

, the individual parent will be fully aware of what to face and how to deal with those challenges and

as well as

money to cater for them will be readily available.

For instance

, 85% of Nigerians that gave

birth

at

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old

age

give their children sound education and provision

of

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all their needs and wants at appropriate

time

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times

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.

Hence

, giving

birth

at older

age

enhance quality lifestyles. In conclusion, giving

birth

to offspring that old

age

can be detrimental to

health

as a

result

of

complications

at might occur and can

also

enhance quality ways of life as a

result

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financial income.