Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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The
last
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time, the
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office has become more widespread
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the pandemic, and a
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of people feel much more comfortable working from
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and not wasting their time on rides to the workplace. At the same time, the popularity of
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education grows.
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it is much more affordable and has a lower price, it has negative consequences for juveniles and their future
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,
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the possible problems with socialization. Not only for our mental health, but
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for community development, it is important that people were part of society and was able to build good relationships with family, friends and co-workers. It is easier for people who have a
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of
communication
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in childhood to find a job, friends and
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partners, to participate in political and public
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. In my own experience, minors who never participated a
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in social
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or never joined hobby groups in childhood experience difficulties in building new connections or giving public presentations.
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, children who lack
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in their childhood
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homeschooling tend to have
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problems and in some cases even psychological problems in the future. The school provides the opportunity to learn and make projects in groups, participate in activities and see your friends in real
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.
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whole experience cannot be replaced by online
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. In order to create the same environment for good social skills in their children, parents need to be even more initiative and spend even more money because a
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of high-quality hobby groups are paid for or located far from
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. In conclusion, until we are not able to efficiently replace the environment provided by schools, I think the study from
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will have a negative impact on children and their future
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote work
  • e-learning
  • accessibility
  • inclusive
  • productivity
  • personalized learning
  • disciplined routine
  • interpersonal skills
  • cybersecurity
  • sustainability
  • work-life balance
  • physical disabilities
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