The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts given illustrate the percentage of changing ownership of electrical appliances and the number of
hours
spending
on doing Wrong verb form
spent
housework
in one country from 1920 to 2019. Overall
, the changing of household machines saw large
increment during the specific period of time and Correct article usage
a large
refrigerator
had the greatest growth. Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
Conversely
, the number of hours
of housework
showed decline
over the years.
First of all, in 1920, the ownership of Add an article
a decline
refrigerator
was almost zero Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
percentage
. Replace the word
percent
However
, it surpassed the vacuum cleaner at 55% in 1940, while
the washing machine rose slightly from 40% to 60%. Turning to 1960, vacuum cleaners and washing machines had similar
percentage, which was at 70%. Correct article usage
a similar
In contrast
, almost 90% of households had refrigerator
Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
and
still increased after entering 1980 and reached its peak at 100% Correct word choice
which
along with
vacuum cleaners in 2000 and remained constant by 2019. In addition
, washing machines increased to about 65% by 2019, with a small dip in 1980
On the other hand
, in 1920, it took 50 hours
for doing housework
, such
as washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning. Meanwhile, the hours
of spending on doing housework
weekly decreased gradually since 1940 to its lowest at 10% in 2019.Submitted by farel2300 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, housework with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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