Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and cociety. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, everyone knows about social networking sites like Facebook, and Instagram. Some people believe that

this

has a negative impact on societies and

also

individuals. I agree with the statement

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there are some positives. I will explain both views in the below essay with relevant examples.

Firstly

, almost every youngster in my country knows about Facebook and keeps posts to make social videos.

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has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, he will not spend time with family rather he is addicted to mobile phones.

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a survey of

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famous articles says that every day each person spends an average of 5 hours of time in

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social networks.

However

,

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will impact their studies especially those who are at

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age.

On the other hand

, if you are in an emergency situation if you put

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recording someone immediately can respond to that

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help.

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way you can utilise and get an advantage over others.

Secondly

, children are making reels and youtube channels for their entertainment . Parents should take responsibility

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not crossing their limits. It should be fun but not a complete job to spend on vlogs. If you are interested in that we get a good amount of money in editing the videos and exploring multiple places to upload and get views from all over the world.

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, I saw a story from a very poor family and she started a channel

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youtube just by making videos of cooking and now she is in

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position.

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encourages and give new opportunity to people who are interested

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. In conclusion, there are both pros and cons but

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time with family and

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good in society

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helps you with a happy life. Don't spend much on mobile phones and other social sites. There is no other opportunity to be with your loved ones.