In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
In many
countries
, the government
prioritises economic growth above all
other concerns.The advantages of this
are the improvement of people’s salaries and the revenue of the government
, and the disadvantages are that environmental issues are underestimated and that there should be trouble in foreign affairs.
One
advantage of prioritising the economic growth of the country
is making everyone rich. That is
because if a certain area of one
country
’s industry becomes successful, people’s wages and companies’ income improve, and this
leads to the advancement of the overall
economy
. The second advantage is an increase in the revenue of the government
. The governments
put more money on social insurance and education if the economy
grows because most governments
impose people and companies a lot of tax depending on the amount of their incomes and profits. For instance
, as the economy
improves, Japanese society has become the safest country
in the world because the increased income of the government
allowed the Japanese government
to establish a comprehensive healthcare/welfare system for everyone, which decreased the number of crimes by outcasted people.
On the other hand
, one
disadvantage of putting the most importance on improving the economy
of a country
is that environmental issues are underestimated. This
is sometimes detrimental because some industries such
as fishery and agriculture can be directly affected by climate changes and pollution, which are the most important basic industries for all citizens. The second disadvantage is producing concerns in foreign affairs. If one
country
focuses on its own economic growth too much, some economically weak countries
are further
exploited and this
causes disputes among the countries
and, in the worst case, wars. For example
, when Japanese car companies flourished in the 1990s, a lot of American car factories went bankrupt and there were a lot of riots in Detroit city, which forced the governments
of both countries
to negotiate economic sanctions even though they were economically allied nations.
In conclusion, although
the governments
in most countries
put the priority on improving the economy
to make people wealthier and to increase the tax income of the governments
, there are disadvantages such
as underestimation of environmental issues causing damages to fishery and agriculture and concerns of economic frictions with neighbour countries
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