The pie chart represents the types of careers that Antropology graduates after completing their Bachelor’s degree course from one University. The table displays the wages after five years of working in this particular field.

The pie chart represents the types of careers that Antropology graduates after completing their Bachelor’s degree course from one University. The table displays the wages after five years of working in this particular field.
The pie chart represents the types of careers that
Antropology
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Anthropology
graduates after completing their Bachelor’s degree course from one University. The table displays the wages after five years of working in
this
particular field.
According to
the chart,
it is clear that
over
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half of them had chosen to be full-time workers
while
having part-time work
along with
a master’s degree was the least selected.
Furthermore
, the types of employment that received the highest income of over $75,000 were freelance consultants and the Government sector.
According to
the chart, full-time work had the highest contribution for slightly over fifty
while
there was only 5% of students who decided to work a part-time job and study post-graduation. The part-time job was the second most popular option close to the unemployed for 15% and 12% respectively. Freelance consultants and the government sector had similar
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of income proportion which were a small portion of $25,000-$49,000 and 15% of $50,000-$74,999.
Additionally
, four in five
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of both
also
had income over $75,000. Private companies had
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different characteristics, the highest percentage of salaries belonged to $50,000-$74,999 for 35% and the least was 10% to $25,000-$49,999.
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