Without capital punishment(the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crime of violence increases. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some critics
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that not having
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sentence
our existence are not safe and misdeeds
enlarges
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.
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penalties
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crucial to
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misdeed in the community. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with
this
view because capital
punishment
waste
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limited resources and it is irrevocable. Capital
punishment
squanders the time and energy of courts, prosecuting attorneys,
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counsel, juries,
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and law enforcement personnel. It unduly burdens the criminal justice system and it is
thus
counterproductive as an instrument for societal control of
violent
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and crimes.
For instance
, it is stated in the United State supreme court of the early 1970's that limited funds that could be used to prevent crimes, provide education and jobs were spent on capital
punishment
.
Hence
,
death
penalties waste limited resources.
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,
death
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the death
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is crucial and unusual because it is of the earliest days of
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slavery
, and other unlawful punishments, like those barbaric practices,
executions
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and executions
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have no place in a civilized society. It is
also
unusual because only a random sampling of convicted murderers receive a
death
sentence
.
Also
, executions
denies
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due process of law as
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imposition is irrevocable depriving an individual of the opportunity to benefit from new evidence or new laws that might warrant the reversal of a conviction or the setting aside of a
death
sentence
.
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, my innocent
neighbor
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who was convicted
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death
on account of the murder of his child was killed before the arrival of the evidence that he was innocent.
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,
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does not control crimes. In conclusion, in the absence of
execution
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our survival is risky and
misdemeanor
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grows. Execution is a determining factor to reduce misdeed in the
neighborhood
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and I disagree since capital
punishment
waste limited resources and denies due process of law.
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