write a formal letter yyou ahve an accident
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Jimena Ilaria and as a frequent ,customer I have to say I am feeling disappointed that I am not sure if I am going back there.
I was walking to the bakery sector when I fell on the floor. At that moment I realised the floor was completely wet, it was just being mopped. I hurt my wrist, when
this
happened I did not feel too much pain but when I arrived home the pain started growing so I ended up in the hospital just to have my wrist checked. Nothing was broken, it was fine, it just needed some ice.
I feel something should be done to avoid future possible accidents. For example
, you can leave a sign of wet
floor so clients can be aware of that and walk carefully.
I hope my advice is taken into consideration and I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
Maria IlariaCorrect article usage
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.