You have recently moved to a different location where you experience frequent electricity breakdown. Write a letter to the electricity board. In your letter, -describe the situation, -tell what problems you are facing due to this, -explain what you want the board to do

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the service of electricity in our Lakeville city. It is becoming an un-bearing situation as the service interrupting a lot in
this
area. I am new in
this
town, just moved from Lakecister
last
month. Every day for almost 6 hours we are facing
this
problem. And each breakdown usually lasts 1 hour. Summer season is running, the temperature is nearly 32 degrees Celsius nowadays. People are suffering a lot
due to
high heated environment, especially the elders and children who are passing a painful situation. Electricity breakdown has doubled the suffering.
Due to
this
tremendous interruption, fruits and vegetables in the fridge are getting rotten. We are expecting a fruitful solution from the board of electricity to rescue the people of
this
town from
this
condition. At least minimize the interruption to 2 hours daily and fix a time for
this
breakdown. We are waiting with great hope that you will take immediate action after receiving
this
letter and the problem will be solved very soon. Sincerely yours Md. Anwar Hossain
Submitted by Md. Anwar Hossain on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • moreover
  • also
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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