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Band 7.5

You recently bought a second-hand car from a company that sells used cars, but the car developed some problems. You have phoned, left messages and sent emails, but you have not heard anything from the company that sold you the car. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter explain the problems you have had in contacting the company, and explain your dissatisfaction describe the problems with the car tell the manager what you want him to do

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Dear sir, I am writing
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 letter to draw your attention towards the used car that I bought from your company
last
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 week. Unfortunately, the car has triggered several predicaments and I am continuously trying to contact you using distinguish modes but have not received any acknowledgement yet from your organization. I did contact using the number which is mentioned on the company website,
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, my calls always go to voicemail and
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 tendency upsets me.
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 , I left a brief message including the issues as leakage from the oil tank through a tiny hole at the bottom and rear side mirror which does not open sometimes, but did not hear back from your side. No worthless, either reply to me with the solution to resolve the problems with my car as I provided you with my all contact details on the application form at the time of purchasing or kindly refund my money . I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours Sincerely Saman

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Make sure to provide an appropriate introduction that clearly outlines the purpose of your letter.
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Try to include more detailed descriptions of the car's issues and the attempts made to contact the company, as this can enhance your argument and context.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to maintain clarity and coherence throughout the letter.
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Consider varying your sentence structure and using more formal language to improve the overall tone of the letter.
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Clear articulation of the problems faced in contacting the company.
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The request for action is clearly stated at the end of the letter.
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