Nowadays, there is more and more competition for getting into university Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, trying to get acceptance from universities is common among young people.

Although

everyone might get good academic achievements, competition might be the main reason for their psychological traumas. On the one hand, there are some negative effects,

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stress, mental health, and access issues. To be more clear, since thousands of young people are trying to get acceptance

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from universities, and their academic achievement scores are

also

increasing from standards,

as a consequence

, candidates, who

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got lower scores may get stressed and

anxieted

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feelings, because of the competitive atmosphere.

On the other hand

, there are advantages

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this

,

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, it is good that

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busy with lessons,

instead

of wasting their time on social media or

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video games. Because today's common and main problem is living in

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life among young people, so they get different problems,

for instance

, health issues, communication problems, and so on. In conclusion, trying to get

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competitive in recent years, and

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effects are more

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positive

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ones.