You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

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Hey John How are you doing buddy? How is everyone at home? I hope everything is great.All day I am occupied by work and do not have enough time to relax. Yesterday, I was talking to our classmate Rohit and he told me that you got engaged. When I heard that news, I decided to write up to you.

Also

,I felt overjoyed that now you decided to take

this

big step in your life. I told my family about it and they are ecstatic about it. We cannot wait for your marriage as everyone is so eager to join the ceremony. The good news is that I am taking a week off from my work and going to visit your city. So let's meet up and celebrate

this

special moment of your life. Let me know your available dates so that we can catch up. I can't wait to see you. Yours abc

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

153 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

The Closing

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