The diagram shows the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
The three maps demonstrate the development of a place called West
Park
Secondary School
. They indicate the layout of this
school
in the
1950,1980 and 2010, respectively. Correct article usage
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It is clear that
this
area was more functional in 2010 compared with it in
1950.
Back in 1950, Change preposition
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this
place was divided into four parts, houses, farmland, playground, and school
. While
the school
only took a small part of the land, the farmland occupied almost a quarter of the total region. But in 1980, the farmland was replaced by a sportsfield, while
the housing areas were also
taken place by a car park
and a science block. The two facilities equally shared the land that used to belong to house buildings.
In 2010, the most notable change was the expanded car park
. It enlarged nearly three times, which caused the disappearance of the old sports field. While
there still has a newly built smaller sports field, which was located beside the playground, caused the playground was downsized to make room for constructing the new sports field.
Overall
, during the sixty years, the West Park
Secondary School
experienced several changes, while
the most visible change was the expansion of the car park
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