You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

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Dear Teju, I am writing

this

letter to you

that

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because

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I found out that you are engaged

last

month. Actually,

while

I am surfing

the

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apply

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Facebook, I see that one of our mutual friends tagged you about congratulating on. I feel very happy after seeing the picture. I still remember that you are looking for a girl whose height of a minimum of 5 feet 6 inches because you were above 6 feet. I am really happy to see you both as a couple with the perfect pair. I am travelling to my hometown next month

due to

some official work. I can arrange some time to meet you over the weekend. You need to arrange a bachelor party which is pending with you now for all our friends. Let me know if you need any help with marriage shopping for suggestions . Best wishes, Viswa

Submitted by viswa.pinjerla on Sat May 20 2023

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

146 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● tell him/her how you found out ● explain how you feel about the news ● organise to meet your friend for a celebration

Word Count

In some counties young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies

Rich countries often gives financial aid to developing countries although this not a solution to poverty therefore developed countries should give other types of financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museum, town hall, and sporting facility is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you can not manage to meet him at the airport on time. Write a letter asking him to wait for you at the airport and tell him how to identify you.